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Laying in the bed,
I listen to the moans.
The sound of the dying.

The shadows hide me,
So I can be alone.
Try to take care of myself.
To get myself back to my feet.

It's not a sickness,
or a wound,
But a blow to the heart.

The shattered hearts laying on the floor,
surrounded by the pieces of souls.
Tread on by the visitors,
Only caring about their own.

I watch the world go by,
As I lay here,
Frozen in time.
Ever since you broke my heart.

Waiting for Time to heal me,
But she passes by everyday.
Sometimes stabbing me along the way.

I cried out for help,
But most just went on their way.
Not wanting to see another cripple.
Hindered by his heart.

There are, however, a few,
Angels in disguise.
The healers of many and the breaker of few.
She helped me fix myself,
With a healing hug,
She patched together my life.

And sent me on my way.
With a promise to be waiting,
If I ever need a healing hug again.
This is a tribute to :icondarlingangel0565:
I want to thank her for the times she ahs helped me back on my feet and sent me on my way. I know I am not the only person she has helped and I really thank her for helping everyone she can.
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Lunacella Feb 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
So beautiful!!! :iconcrydesuplz:
ZaneTheGuardian Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :huggle: no crying though
This is just...magnificent. And an amazing tribute. You have a real way with words, my friend.
ZaneTheGuardian Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you...a lot
You're very welcome Zune. :huggle:
DarlingAngel0565 Nov 9, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you so much Zune :huggle: The poem is so very beautiful. I really love it.
You are so welcome, my dear friend. Know that I will always be there for you. I will never let you fall and if you do I will be there to help you heal your wounds and smile again.
ZaneTheGuardian Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle: Thanks and I will stand beside you whenever you need help.
shad0wbeast Nov 8, 2012  Student Writer
:clap: i really like this piece.
ZaneTheGuardian Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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